Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

There is a rising number of arguments, that power of advertising popular consumer goods is not reflecting the real necessities of
society
. I agree with
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I am going to present a couple of examples. It cannot be denied, that the current
society
lives in an enormously advertising world. The commercials are everywhere. It is almost impossible to watch evening TV programs until the end, because of the vast number of
ads
. It is hard to concentrate on driving a car because of billboards along the route.
Additionally
, on each ,website you
first
have to come through disrupting
ads
. Linked to
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, if we look carefully at these advertisements, at least 75% of the goods that they are offering we already have and the rest probably we don’t need at all if we don’t have them yet. The mainstream, highly consumable western world, is pushing us to buy vast numbers of different products. Honestly, neither of us needs new clothes every year, new smartphones and many other items. Each company is just following its own profit, which is as greedy as could be imagined,
instead
of reflecting the real needs of
society
.
On the other hand
, advertising may be a relevant source of information as well. If someone is purposely focusing
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a certain product he needs, the
ads
can be helpful. Unfortunately, there is
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minority of these situations in comparison with the number of advertisements. In nutshell, we live in a
society
, which is overfilled with the advertising of products mostly unnecessary, while are not reflecting the real human needs. Unlike these, there are some
ads
, which can be useful.
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