Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solutions to combat this problem? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
Earth
Environments situation has worsened since the period of Change noun form
Earth's
industrial
revolution. There were many activities that have damaged our ecosystem. Add an article
the industrial
However
, the most impactful was the unexpected increase
of greenhouse in our earth
atmosphere Change noun form
earth's
As a result
,our modern society were
trying to salvage the situation Correct subject-verb agreement
was
such
as inventing new kind of energy
, regulations of automobiles, etc). As in
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This
this
essay will exhibit the cause and the solution
of our environment
problem.
Replace the word
environmental
First
of all , The consequence of increasing greenhouse gases was the overall increase
in earth
temperatures. Therefore
, created serious problem
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problems
such
as rising sea level
and damaging many Fix the agreement mistake
levels
organisms
Change noun form
organisms'
organism's
habitat
. Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
Firstly
the increase
in earth
temperature Change noun form
earth's
have
caused the ice glaciers around the Change the verb form
has
earth
to start melting. Hence
, raising up
the sea level. Because of that, many Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
coastal
costal
Correct your spelling
coastal
area
were destroyed. Change to a plural noun
areas
Secondly
, increase
in Correct article usage
an increase
Correct article usage
the earth
earth
temperature Change noun form
earth's
also
caused the organisms habitat
to Change to a genitive case
the organism's habitat
the habitat of the organism
altered
. Add a missing verb
be altered
For
example
drastic change in habitat temperature , Add a comma
,example
as a
result
risks many organisms going extinct.
Add the comma(s)
,result
Therefore
, inventing new
kind of Correct article usage
a new
energy
was a necessity. Green energy
is a
Remove the article
apply
energy
many experts have agreed that it is a solution
of
combating environmental problems. Change preposition
to
For instance
, green energy
were
not created any carbon emissions or toxic gases Change the verb form
was
into
our environment. Change preposition
in
In
addition
the process of harvesting Add a comma
,addition
this
kind of energy
doesn’t do much same
to Correct article usage
the same
it
surroundings as well. Change the pronoun
its
Thus
shifting our usage of our energy
towards green energy
will help ease the burden from
the environment.
In conclusion, Even though the damage Change preposition
on
of
the ecosystem Change preposition
to
were
made and can’t be Correct subject-verb agreement
was
revert
. Wrong verb form
reverted
However
, we have found the solution
to prevent them. Thus
lies in Add an article
the hand
hand
of the government to implement the Fix the agreement mistake
hands
solution
and prevent it Correct your spelling
from
form
worsening.Correct your spelling
from
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