In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent

Criminal actions came back to the onset of humanity when Can killed Abel in cold blood. Over time

crimes

were developing and varying,

therefore

countries

started to pass laws and punishments to control them. As long as the

crimes

were progressing the governments became more restricted regards to the rules. Nowadays, judgment is different, as there are courts, juries, lawyers, victims,

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.

In addition

, prisons and various

crime

types.

However

, the

crimes

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rates are increasing. The

crime

rating is not only increasing but

also

the

crimes

are becoming more violent every day. Now the reason for how brutal are the

crimes

now is not clear.

As a result

, everyday

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and the press announce new

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in a different

place

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. Some politicians in high-income

countries

claim that the level of

crime

in developed

countries

is lower.

However

, it is inflating. I think it’s because the level of immigration

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and speech freedom is high there and

this

makes a lot of people take

illegal

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method

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to immigrate into developed

countries

. Developing

countries

in

this

era suffering from the economic crisis and income gaps between the high social and low social classes. As a consequence, the level of equal distribution of the country’s resources is decreasing and people, who are suffering from a shortage in

basic

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turn to be

crimes

.

Drugs

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normalization is one of the societal catastrophes which is the reason demo nation of

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crimes

, especially among youth. The government of different

countries

tries to be more restrictive regards to the law and punishment, and

also

to distribute the concept of equality. As all people are equal under the umbrella of law.

Nevertheless

, one of the fundamental

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for increasing the number of victims is the government’s reluctance to consider certain unpleasant actions as a type of

crime

. To calculate, Societies need to upgrade the credibility of the law and the perspectives towards the different actions.