You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

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Dear sir/madam I am writing

this

letter to inform you regarding a

job

releative

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relative

. I am Joban. I am working a

job

you

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company part-time and after work my

job

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am attending a

course

in the afternoon time.

Moreover

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am interested a currently running a

course

because it is very beneficial for me and

also

carries

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donot

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do not

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a full

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full time

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full-time

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job

you

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your

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company .

Furthermore

this

course

will be crucial for my future and

also

increase

the

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wage . Because

this

course

will be higher education of the engineering and lot of

job

offer

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offers

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available in

this

course

. As well as my all

the

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apply

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relatives suggested that

this

opportunity and full fill our dream and successful our life. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thankyou

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, You sincerely, Dharma

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

137 words

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