You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

Dear sir/madam I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding a
job
releative
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relative
. I am Joban. I am working a
job
in
you
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company part-time and after work my
job
i
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I
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am attending a
course
in the afternoon time.
Moreover
,
i
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I
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am interested a currently running a
course
because it is very beneficial for me and
also
carries
i
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I
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am
donot
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do not
do
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a full
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full time
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full-time
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job
you
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company .
Furthermore
,
this
course
will be crucial for my future and
also
increase
the
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wage . Because
this
course
will be higher education of the engineering and lot of
job
offer
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available in
this
course
. As well as my all
the
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apply
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relatives suggested that
this
opportunity and full fill our dream and successful our life. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thankyou
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, You sincerely, Dharma
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