You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

#course #job #boss #work #time #-tell #decision #-explain #reason

Dear sir/madam I am writing

this

letter to inform you regarding a

job

releative

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relative

. I am Joban. I am working a

job

you

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company part-time and after work my

job

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am attending a

course

in the afternoon time.

Moreover

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am interested a currently running a

course

because it is very beneficial for me and

also

carries

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donot

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do not

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a full

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full time

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full-time

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job

you

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your

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company .

Furthermore

this

course

will be crucial for my future and

also

increase

the

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wage . Because

this

course

will be higher education of the engineering and lot of

job

offer

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offers

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available in

this

course

. As well as my all

the

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apply

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relatives suggested that

this

opportunity and full fill our dream and successful our life. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thankyou

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Thank you

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, You sincerely, Dharma

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thirdly
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for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

137 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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