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some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?

#people #lives
In
this
 century, living aboard is very common since we have many technologies and pathways to
be
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 global citizens. Even though, there
is
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 some people
would
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 like to live in the same
city
 they were born in, which is probably a safe zone for them.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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why they like to live in the same
city
instead
 of moving to another
city
 and what pros and cons about it. Living in their birth
city
 is easier than relocation because they know everything in their hometown. They are not necessary to adapt to the new society.
Moreover
, Being close to family is a precious thing because you have someone by your side and they are always there for you.
On the other hand
, As I mentioned, Living in the same
city
 makes you know what is best and
advantages
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 for you in the area. That means you can find better jobs and life solutions.
For example
, my classmate from elementary school started her farming business when she was young because she had
experience
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 and knowledge from local people.
On the other hand
, when you have not moved out or explored new things. You will easily be stuck in the frame of the area since everywhere has different benefits and interesting things to try and some cities could not provide everything that you are interested in.
For example
, A boy who is obsessed with IT and technology but his village could not provide it could affect him
to
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have limited supply and knowledge. In conclusion, I accept that living in the same
city
 is very warm and secure but since we have limited time in
this
 amazing world.
Therefore
, exploring and finding where we belong is
also
 an interesting thing to do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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