you are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your teacher. in your letter introduce yourself. explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

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Hi Sir, My name is Erdinger Beer having roll number 1234. I am studying at DAV college and my course is History. There was a project which needs to be submitted

last

week for writing an essay on the world war and its side effects on the World.

Although

, I have completed most of the project and still need some time to finish it.

Therefore

, I was not able to submit it

last

week.

Hence

, I am writing to you regarding an extension of the project so that I can finish it and it does not affect my grades. It got delayed because I am reading a lot of books and watching documentaries to collect factual data. I hope you will consider my request and in spite of being delayed, you will allow me an extension of 1 week so that I can finish my research. Hope to see your positive response. Have a great day. Yours Sincerely, Erdinger Beer

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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you are taking a course at a local college. the deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it. write a letter to your teacher. in your letter introduce yourself. explain why you have not handed in the project yet. request more time to do it.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

if the product is good and meets consumer needs than advertising is unnecessary… To what extent do you agree?

Learning English is important Agree or disagree?

A number of People are moving from rural areas to cities. Is it a positive or a negative development?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?