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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras).In many cases,the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening . Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

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 we have a high lack of anonymity not only on the Internet. Government and companies want to know all our steps, thoughts and
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. For me these tendencies are terrifying and I believe that we will return the term “private space” in our everyday life. Anonymity must be one of the basic human rights like liberty of word and faith. You mustn’t prove that you need anonymity
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 somebody it’s your right. If we won’t do anything our society will transform into
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 utopia where big brother
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 future of total control. But it doesn’t mean that we have to turn off all cameras and enjoy freedom, don't miss it and separate the private life of individuals and obvious security measures.
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