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The development of tourism contributed English becoming the most prominent language in the world.Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

#development #tourism #english #language #world #people
I used to be a full-time student till 2019 in the field of computer science, after completing my graduation I joined as a software developer in
one
 of the MNCs and Currently, I'm working over there for the past 3 years There are a lot of interesting things to learn every semester. The project work each semester is the part I enjoy most. These projects enable me to work in a group and be hands-on with the theories I learn throughout the semester. There is nothing
in particular
 that I dislike, but sometimes the schedule can be very hectic.
For example
, in
one
 of the semesters, we have 7 theory subjects and 2 practical labs and
one
 mini project that we have to submit , so we used to learn the theory subjects and at the same time we need to apply those things practically to clear the lab exam and could hardly get any sleep at night during those days Yes, of course, I’ve always been a big fan of music since I was a little girl. Sometimes I
also
 listen to music before sleeping at night for
one
 hour and when I am riding my motorbike, which will both help me relax and feel more energetic when I hear the tune.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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