In a number or developing countries it is difficult to recruit teachers to work in remote and rural areas and this can have a serious impact on education in these regions. Why do many teachers not want to work in these areas? What can be done to encourage teachers to take up posts in these regions?

It is known that there are many employment options for

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in underdeveloped countries;

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, the vast majority of

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decline the

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because of the location. One of the main reasons why professors

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type of

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offer

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is because they are likely to be far away from cities, and

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far away from the comfort that cities bring with

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them with

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, I believe that higher pay rates would significantly encourage

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to accept offers in rural areas. Cities have many conveniences

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as well connected means of transportation, a variety of

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chains, the best medical service and a vast option array of entertainment. In order to move to rural areas,

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need to give up

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these comforts, which is not easy, especially if they lived their whole lives in an urban area.

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decide to work in an underdeveloped area, they need to have a car in order to move from

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place to another because of the lack of means of

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system.

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means that they need to buy a car and pay for insurance and fuel.

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, the expenses get higher are increased compared to in the city. People usually take

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offers if the income would entirely

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entirely the expenses and

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it. It is likely that a higher number of

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would accept a

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offer

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in a rural area if the pay rate is significantly higher than the offers received within the city.

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is the same as paying them more for the lack of the

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city's

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conveniences. They eventually do not have entertaining events throughout the week in the countryside, but at least they would have more money to spend on holidays. In conclusion, professors

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teachers

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are unlikely to take a

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in remote rural areas because of the lack of the city’s comforts.

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if companies

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high salaries for the

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role,

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are likely to consider and eventually accept the proposal.