Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It's a

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fact that gas

prices

are drastically increasing. Some might view

this

as a solution to the ever-growing congestion. I think

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view is totally

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inaccurate

. There

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so many

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to combat

this

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crisis

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essay, I will give arguments that support my view. The growth and spread of vehicles is a necessary evil.

However

, just because it makes

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our-lives

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easier doesn't mean we shouldn't try our best to better combat its

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. But

instead

of constantly increasing fuel

prices

, we should look at other solutions.

For instance

, governments can invest more in public infrastructure like

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more

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. Making these improvements will likely decrease the number of

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car owners

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which will

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lowers

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traffic-jams and the emission of harmful gases.  Another way we can better deal with congestion is by applying technology. To be more specific electric cars. With the fast growth and acceptance of

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like

Tesla

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we stand a real chance at revolutionalizing the way we commute. Our future aim should be more focused on lowering the

prices

of these machines

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because if more people can afford to buy them, they will be more commonly used.

This

will make our chances of lowering the effect of climate change much better. To sum up, even though the increase

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congestion isn't an issue we should take lightly, increasing fuel

prices

is a much inferior solution. We should work on improving

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infrastructure

and technology in order to better our future.