It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.
Some people think that the process of change in life is an integral part of everyone and has more pros than cons. In
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essay, I will understand why opinions may differ. Linking Words
Firstly
, I will discuss how change can positively affect an individual. Linking Words
Secondly
, I will consider possible difficulties.
First of all, huge competition is growing in our modern world and every person who wants to be competitive is trying to discover something new for himself. Undoubtedly, for Linking Words
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, he needs to constantly change something and become better. Linking Words
For example
, my friend worked as an ordinary animator for two years ago and he didn’t have enough money for a normal life, after which he decided to study SMM marketing and immediately after Linking Words
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his earnings skyrocketed.Many people are constantly changing something to achieve heights.
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On the other hand
, the decision to master a new type of activity can be a difficult stage.Human beings have different stress tolerance and there may be a fear of failure. Linking Words
In addition
, if an individual is unsure of himself and without thinking about changing something significant, Linking Words
this
can lead to some problems.Linking Words
For instance
,my cousin always loved to draw and dreamed of entering an art university,but Linking Words
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she decided that she couldn’t become a great person in Linking Words
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As a result
, the brain can suffer greatly from constant stress.
In conclusion, we can see that Linking Words
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trend is beneficial to society. Linking Words
However
, one must always be prepared for a different outcome of events.Linking Words
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