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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: "A woman’s place is in the home." What do you think

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 are called the "
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back bone
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family
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the family
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 and modern
women
 are
career oriented
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Personally
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speaking
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women
 are less appreciated even in the family and society. "Same job Same salary" is often discussed but rarely understood
policy
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the policy
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.Even in
modern
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 era
women
 are getting paid less than men and they are omitted from the career options because
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 have a family to take care of.
Secondly
 all over the world
women
 are dealing with workplace harassment and exploitation .The number of
women
 who become a victim of workplace bullying is increasing. There are some people who argue that
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women
needs
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 to stay home but when you look at the fact that
women
 are multitasking
in
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 home and they can do the same in
workplace
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the workplace
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 . To sum
up
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women
 can maintain a steady work-life and
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 to complete
her
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apply
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all
duties
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their duties
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 as a family and an employee.
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