in the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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is a traditional teaching method to
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lessons to many
students
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However
, since
technology
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for education experienced a breakthrough in recent years, it is often claimed that
people
can sit in front of a computer
instead
of having a face-to-face lesson in a classroom. I completely agree with
this
view, the reasons are what we will be looking at in
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piece.
First
and foremost, the internet provides numerous learning
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so that
people
can self-study.
People
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the internet conveniently. As long as
students
have
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knowledge to understand the content, they still can learn by themselves. The role of teachers and
lecturers
should be
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students
' specific questions
instead
of reading text
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a book loudly in front of a class.
On the other hand
, some
people
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virtual lessons
such
as Zoom
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lessons
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and Google
classroom
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are lacking interaction between
lecturers
and
students
. In fact, there are so many ways to ensure teachers can have enough communication with
students
. You can see a raise-your-hand button in the corner of the Zoom application, using it
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a suitable moment can let
lecturers
know you have some problems. Occasionally, in order to assess
students'
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learning progress,
lecturers
may use a quiz system to test
students
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Students
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to
lecturers
for asking questions, with graphics or voice
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if necessary. To sum up, due to
students
' self-learning
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capability
and innovative functions of online lessons application, I wholeheartedly deem that presenting lectures is not a must for
students
.
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