in the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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is a traditional teaching method to
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lessons to many
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, since
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for education experienced a breakthrough in recent years, it is often claimed that
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can sit in front of a computer
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of having a face-to-face lesson in a classroom. I completely agree with
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and foremost, the internet provides numerous learning
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so that
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can self-study.
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the internet conveniently. As long as
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have
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knowledge to understand the content, they still can learn by themselves. The role of teachers and
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should be
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students
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' specific questions
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of reading text
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a book loudly in front of a class.
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, some
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virtual lessons
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as Zoom
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lessons
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and Google
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classrooms
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are lacking interaction between
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and
students
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. In fact, there are so many ways to ensure teachers can have enough communication with
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. You can see a raise-your-hand button in the corner of the Zoom application, using it
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a suitable moment can let
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know you have some problems. Occasionally, in order to assess
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students'
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learning progress,
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may use a quiz system to test
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Students
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can send
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to
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for asking questions, with graphics or voice
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recordings
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if necessary. To sum up, due to
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' self-learning
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and innovative functions of online lessons application, I wholeheartedly deem that presenting lectures is not a must for
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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