Today, many people want to get married and have children in their thirties and rather when they are yonger. it is postive or negative devlopment?

Nowadays, more

number of

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individuals prefer to settle down with

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a partner

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partner

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partners

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and have babies in

later

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the later

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part of their life, which was not the case in the past.

This

strong

postive

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positive

devlopmet

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development

and

this

essay

elaborates

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further

about

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it.

Firstly

, in their 20s, with masters in exceptionally intelligent subjects, pupils can build their carrier and

then

with their impeccable skills they can enjoy the perks of work they always have desired.

However

,

this

hustle can not be enjoyed, if a child got married, because of all the

responsiblites

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responsibilities

.

Furthermore

, the time after education can be

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to gain some skills to secure their future.

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Event

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from

young

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a young

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age, people are more serious

towards

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standing on their feet than anything else. To illustrate- doctors got married in their 30s because

of

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all the years of education they have to get makes everything deley.

Moreover

, things required to take care of children are

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significantly

expensive, to handle that burden and couples need to have

finacial

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financial

stabality

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stability

.

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can be

achive

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achieved

achieve

by the good setup of the business or the

with

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having a good job title.

Also

, couples do not want to have a baby until they have their own home. People now are very practical

tha

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than

that

before, and give emphasis

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family

familt

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matters,

this

privilege can not be managed by someone who is naive.

For example

- my friend is looking for the

apparetment

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apartment

before doing any

comitment

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commitment

to his partner, as to avoid any

missmanagement

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mismanagement

in the future. In summary,

although

, it is

personal

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choice when they wanted to set up

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their

family, various external factors make

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influence

to

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this

decision.

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is

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positive

postive

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devlopment

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development

as considering the facts above.