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The given bar graphs show the statistic for marriage and divorce in nine noteworthy
Countries
 in the Two years 1981 and 1994. In an ,overview the united state has the highest
number
 of
marriages
 and divorces. the
first
 graph highlighted the
number
 of
marriages
. As we can see the most
countries
 the
number
 of
marriages
 decreases in both years . The USA has the most
marriages
 in both 1981 and 1994 but has slightly decreased in 1994 ( 10.6 to 9.1 thousand) The
number
 of
marriages
 in the rest of the
countries
 is almost the same ( less than 6.4 and more than 4.3 thousand).The only country where there was an increase in the
number
 of
marriages
 was Denmark. By ,comparison the rate of divorce increased in most
countries
 over the same period. the only expectation of
this
 trend was Germany , there was no change and stay remain the
number
 of divorces.The USA and Denmark where the figure fell.The country with the fewest
number
 of divorces in both 1981 and 1994 was Italy ( less than 0.5 thousand)
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