Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Nowadays, one of the biggest issues around the world is that most
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schools have an incidence of bullying. In my opinion,
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of their guardian is the reason behind it.
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why
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should give
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children
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kind of issue. To commence with, youngsters are not fully aware of what is right or wrong. In
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generation, most
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the
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are busy working
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the fact that they want to give a better life for their
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at work just to have more salary and after they got home they are too exhausted to talk or ask
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their
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about schools.
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, the child will seek attention
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their classmates by bullying them.
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, they do not know if it is the right way to behave
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other people. Making
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their
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ones are crucial to be updated
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their life. One of the
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that
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adults should do is to balance their
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family and work.
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, even though
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are working for longer hours, they should make
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to discuss with their
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about school after work.
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, it is better to have a daily schedule
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just to supervise them and lecture them on how to socialize. In
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, youngsters will be guided properly on their behaviour.
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to that, they will not seek attention
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their classmates because
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their
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are there to listen to them. To sum up, in cases of bullying the reason
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it is not having enough tutelage from their
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. In that,
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management is the solution to
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, so that they will have
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to supervise their
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, bullying
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other people will not be an option and can be prevented.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Supervision
  • Unstructured times
  • Neglect
  • Cyberbullying
  • Prevalence
  • Awareness
  • Social group
  • Popularity
  • Recess
  • Addressing
  • Prevention
  • Safe environment
  • Intervention
  • Counseling
  • Support systems
  • Peer mediation
  • Anti-bullying campaigns
  • Zero-tolerance policies
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