Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, numerous parents always think highly of anything from the past for children.
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, some individuals claim that
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to learn whatever
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from millions of
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ago. Personally, I believe that
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is a valuable source of information to understand
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life, but
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should not apply old objectivity for now.
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the one hand, I strongly claim that
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should learn
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history
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based on various reasons.
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,
history
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brings
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significantly knowledge. It explains
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people
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about origins and construction of the
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. If
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do not have
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, they will not understand
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exceptional
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.
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, since schools are established, countries
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consider
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considered
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history
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like
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as
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main subject in order to explain
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children about
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the reason
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why
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country
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could exist.
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, when I was a child, I really hate
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because I see it
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boring. But until now, after learning
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, I realized about wonderful worth that made me
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knowledge.
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, learning
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way of improving self-awareness.
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would be proud of their
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since
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having
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to preserve and protect their
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.
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, many young
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tend to devastate historical sites because they
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about
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their importance.
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, anything coming from the past makes
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understand deeply about sustainable worth.
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, learning
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history
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in order to know about
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the hero
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country
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. Or learning Japan
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,
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could know
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the country
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about modern machinery.
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the other hand, appreciating ancient
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is definitely important. But
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should not apply outdated thinking in their life today since
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could slow down social development.
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, in the past, men could marry a large of
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at the same time but women only could marry one husband.
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purely nonsense and unfair to women.
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,
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should inherit significant
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and develop
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modern thinking in order that they catch up with
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trend
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. In conclusion, I completely approve of learning anything from the past for life today but
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should not insist on maintaining outdated thinking
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