Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, numerous parents always think highly of anything from the past for children.
However
, some individuals claim that
people
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to learn whatever
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from millions of
year
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ago. Personally, I believe that
history
is a valuable source of information to understand
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life, but
people
should not apply old objectivity for now.
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the one hand, I strongly claim that
people
should learn
value
history
based on various reasons.
Firstly
,
history
brings
people
significantly knowledge. It explains
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to
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people
about origins and construction of the
country
. If
people
do not have
history
, they will not understand
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exceptional
value
.
Hence
, since schools are established, countries
always
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consider
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considered
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history
like
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as
a
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main subject in order to explain
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children about
reason
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the reason
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why
country
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the country
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could exist.
For instance
, when I was a child, I really hate
history
because I see it
purely
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as purely
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boring. But until now, after learning
history
, I realized about wonderful worth that made me
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knowledge.
Moreover
, learning
history
is
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way of improving self-awareness.
People
would be proud of their
country
since
then
having
awareness
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the awareness
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to preserve and protect their
country
.
However
, many young
people
tend to devastate historical sites because they
are not appreciate
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about
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their importance.
Thus
, anything coming from the past makes
people
understand deeply about sustainable worth.
For example
, learning
Vietnam
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history
in order to know about
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the hero
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country
. Or learning Japan
history
,
people
could know
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about modern machinery.
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the other hand, appreciating ancient
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values
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is definitely important. But
people
should not apply outdated thinking in their life today since
they
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could slow down social development.
For instance
, in the past, men could marry a large of
wife
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wives
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at the same time but women only could marry one husband.
That is
purely nonsense and unfair to women.
Thus
,
people
should inherit significant
value
and develop
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modern thinking in order that they catch up with
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trend
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. In conclusion, I completely approve of learning anything from the past for life today but
people
should not insist on maintaining outdated thinking
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