You recently went to a concert and thought obe of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to this singer. In your letter Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities. Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear
Mr.
Jazz
I hope Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter find
you in the pink of your health. I am writing Change the verb form
finds
this
letter about your recent concert in Delhi and want you to provide me Change preposition
with sone
Correct your spelling
some
sone
tips Correct your spelling
some
in
Change preposition
on
music
.
I recently watched your performance in Delhi. It was incredible. You have a melodious and sweet sounding
voice. Add a hyphen
sweet-sounding
Moreover
your Add a comma
,Moreover
music
give
peace to Change the verb form
gives
soul
.
I am a Add an article
the soul
Add a hyphen
first-year
first year
Add a hyphen
first-year
music
student in
Change preposition
at
delhi
university and learning to play Change the capitalization
Delhi
piano
. I play the guitar well too and Change the article
the piano
also
took part in India's little music
champions.
Next
month, we have a music
concert at university and in
dilemma what kind of song we should perform as well as background Add a missing verb
are in
music
. Kindly give some useful tips as you are my role model..
I would appreciate you if you reply Replace the punctuation
.
...
me
regarding my questions so that Change preposition
to me
i
can achieve heights in Change the capitalization
I
this
field.
Looking forward to hear
from you.
Yours sincerely
Navdeep Change the verb form
hearing
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.