You recently went to a concert and thought obe of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to this singer. In your letter Say how you feel about his performance Give details of your musical activities. Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear
Mr.
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Jazz I hope
this
letter
find
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you in the pink of your health. I am writing
this
letter about your recent concert in Delhi and want you to provide me
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sone
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tips
in
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music
. I recently watched your performance in Delhi. It was incredible. You have a melodious and
sweet sounding
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voice.
Moreover
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your
music
give
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peace to
soul
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. I am a
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first-year
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first year
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music
student
in
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delhi
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university and learning to play
piano
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. I play the guitar well too and
also
took part in India's little
music
champions.
Next
month, we have a
music
concert at university and
in
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dilemma what kind of song we should perform as well as background
music
. Kindly give some useful tips as you are my role model
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I would appreciate you if you reply
me
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regarding my questions so that
i
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can achieve heights in
this
field. Looking forward to
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from you. Yours sincerely Navdeep
kaur
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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