Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is more useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that
television
programmes are considered
as
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a beneficial source for learning, while others agree that watching
television
channels
are meant for entertainment.
Although
, there are specific
channels
that focus on educating the viewer. But
this
essay argues that most
television
shows are aimed to allow
people
enjoy
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watching their favourite shows and stay up to date with current affairs. There are a couple of educational
channels
that inform the viewer in areas of interest they wish to pursue more knowledge.
However
,
this
is not considered
as
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a reliable method for learning as most
people
prefer to use
internet
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when it comes to
studying
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because of the vast sources readily available online.
For example
, students in the UAE prefer to use
Udemy
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website and YouTube as
a
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support for their studies. Others say that watching
television
is considered
as
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a form of enjoyment as it gathers the whole family to watch their favourite show and spend some precious time together.
Additionally
, there is a large number of
people
who use the
television
to stay updated with the world news.
For instance
, a study has shown that in
people
Lebanon
view
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news
channels
mostly on their televisions. In conclusion,
although
there
are
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a certain group who
prefer
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prefers
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to watch the
television
for learning purposes,
this
essay finds that a large number of
people
aim to watch programmes for entertainment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • informative documentaries
  • interactive learning
  • entertaining content
  • reality shows
  • cartoons
  • intellectual development
  • parental guidance
  • screen time
  • creative thinking
  • educational potential
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