A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • explain how to apply for the job

Dear Johnny, I'm writing a letter to you about the job you were searching for
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country.There is a vacancy for hotel management in my place .And in
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work you have to deal with tourists ,sure you may like it because you like foreigners. I found
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work will be excellent for you because you have
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experience
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it for the past four years.you like And I'm sure you will feel easy to work.And I saw you were good at dealing with other people .
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apply
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this
job anyhow
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week.While you apply you have to go to the website of Osaka hotel management.com .There you will find more information
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. I can't wait to hear from you whether you like it or not. Your friend Kim
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation
  • industry
  • duties and responsibilities
  • typical day
  • skills and experiences
  • job requirements
  • company culture
  • personality
  • work ethic
  • application process
  • job listing
  • submit an application
  • documents required
  • tailored resume
  • cover letter
  • relevant experiences
  • reviewing documents
  • practicing for interviews
  • promptly
  • deadlines
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