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The age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020

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Information is provided by a bar chart illustrating different ages of people living in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. One of the significant factors is that the aged 25-54 showed a notable upward trend and dominated the
group
 each year. In 1990, approximately a
third
 of the adult
population
 lived, while the
number
 aged under 14
group
 was similar to adults in its percentage, at roughly one quarter. In 2010, the
population
 of adults was nearly twice higher than the aged 0-14, at almost 40% and just over 20 %, respectively. Nearly a half of the
population
 was aged from 25-54 in 2020, which was higher than teenagers and children, around 30%. Young adult (aged 15-24) was the
third highest
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number
group
 in 1990, at around 22%. After that,
however
, it decreased consistently and became the lowest
number
 of aged
group
, at just under one in ten. The least of the
group
 were the elders(65 and over) and aged 55-54. Both groups showed a similar period of stability. In 1990 and 2000, both these two groups had a similar
number
, but the aged 55-54 was only
two
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third
 of the
population
 of elders.
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