The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy?

Nowadays, the declining population becomes a new problem in many countries. In order to encourage married people to raise more

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formulate a

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that finances

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to take care of their

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more easily. Both merits and demerits are should be discussed. One of the benefits is that providing funds to

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can lessen the financial stress. Many couples both have to work to support their family because the prices are rising.

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means that

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may spend more time on their jobs rather than on their

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. If

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can assist them to alleviate the incoming problem, they are more adults waiting to give a bath.

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traditional thinking, women have to stay home and take the responsibility to attend to

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, the best part of the

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does not require which parent.

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, the father and mother can share the raising responsibility. Another benefit is that the

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provides some interests for

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. Since the population is decreasing, the taxes are

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dropping, and

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are nearly bankrupt.

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, the Taiwanese birth rate is lower than the ageing rate. Research has shown that the Taiwanese government can not afford the elderly‘s retirement pays because the taxes from the younger generation are serious increase insufficient.

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to say, the Taiwanese government has to encourage couples to give

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so there are more citizens to pay the taxes for retired people.

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, there are disadvantages in the

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since the

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mentions

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and only provides funds to one of them, the single families and grandparents families are not considered in

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, the specific families are usually the ones that need support from

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. Another drawback is that some

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are born with diseases which trouble

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more than others who have a behaving child. The ill

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require care and money to help them grow up healthily. If

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only have a rule for all of the family, it may cause a severe unfair atmosphere in the society. In summary, encouraging couples to have more babies is an excellent

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for the young generation and

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may bring about a huge backlash if that does not formulate well.