Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A few humans are comfortable
to live
their Change the verb form
living
live
in poor conditions Replace the word
lives
such
as unsatisfaction in
work or lack of money. Change preposition
with
However
, along with others
I opine that it is worth trying hard for improving these situations.
On the Add a comma
,others
first
hand, people are accepting situations like Correct your spelling
inadequate
inedequate
working environment as well as weak financial status as they are not willing to face challenges. They do not have the courage to fight against their poor circumstances which is why they adjust Correct article usage
an inedequate
with
Change preposition
to
thier
life. Correct your spelling
their
For instance
, an illiterate person who is doing a labour job in a factory,
would continue doing it despite extremely low wages and Remove the comma
apply
humiliating
office environment. Correct article usage
a humiliating
Hence
, they think that is
best in their interest if they accept their circumstances and get adapted to it
.
Correct pronoun usage
them
On the other hand
, rest of the mankind believes that their current living standards can only be improved if they put their efforts to make it
better. Correct pronoun usage
them
Instead
of living a life which is poor as well as unhappy, one can develop a new skill which can aid in improving their living standards. To illustrate, though an illiterate worker can not go to a university to obtain a professional degree, he can certainly retrieve some professional skills development training which can assist him to find a well paying employer which can elevate his financial status. Thus
, I believe that putting efforts in right
direction can certainly change the status of the public.
In conclusion, a number of humankind Add an article
the right
thinks
that they should not fight for conditions like money shortage and unfriendly working conditions Correct subject-verb agreement
think
at
their occupation. Change preposition
in
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, one should do everything to change their lifestyle.Submitted by hvyas on
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