Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A few humans are comfortable
to live
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their
live
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in poor conditions
such
as unsatisfaction
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work or lack of money.
However
, along with
others
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I opine that it is worth trying hard for improving these situations. On the
first
hand, people are accepting situations like
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inadequate
inedequate
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working environment as well as weak financial status as they are not willing to face challenges. They do not have the courage to fight against their poor circumstances which is why they adjust
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thier
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their
life.
For instance
, an illiterate person who is doing a labour job in a factory
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would continue doing it despite extremely low wages and
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office environment.
Hence
, they think
that is
best in their interest if they accept their circumstances and get adapted to
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.
On the other hand
, rest of the mankind believes that their current living standards can only be improved if they put their efforts to make
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better.
Instead
of living a life which is poor as well as unhappy, one can develop a new skill which can aid in improving their living standards. To illustrate, though an illiterate worker can not go to a university to obtain a professional degree, he can certainly retrieve some professional skills development training which can assist him to find a well paying employer which can elevate his financial status.
Thus
, I believe that putting efforts in
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direction can certainly change the status of the public. In conclusion, a number of humankind
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that they should not fight for conditions like money shortage and unfriendly working conditions
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their occupation.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, one should do everything to change their lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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