nowadays , some people say that private vehicle are convenient for traveling . Discuss both view and given your opinion .

People have different views about how to transport these days. Some people believe that it is better to utilize

own

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your own

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vechile

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vehicle

,

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however

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,however

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the others have

a

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the

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opposite view which is about

to use

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using

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aeroplanes or trains. While there are some benefits in the latter point,

i

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I

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believe that using own

vechile

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vehicle

vehicles

usually have more pleasure.

To begin

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with

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,with

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the

first

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view,

traveling

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travelling

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by personal

cars

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car

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is very enjoyable,

specially

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especially

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when your family are with you. It gives you

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

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to circulate

among

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in

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the city which is not able to go

with

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by

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tramva

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trauma

.

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, if you want to visit

a

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apply

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rural

areas

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area

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of the destination city, there are not

much

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many

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facilities to use them.

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, because buses take

a certain routes

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a certain route

certain routes

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,you may get stuck in traffic. For

this

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reason, you can save your time

by passing

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bypassing

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the traffic jams by choosing other ways to reach your destination. On the other view, using public facilities for travelling

also

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have

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has

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its own profits. For

instnace

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instance

, time is very important for some individuals like

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businessmen

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business men

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businessmen

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. Because of

this

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fact, they usually take a flight for their trips. Or moving among cities, using

bus

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a bus

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or

trains

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train

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are

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is

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much cheaper than private cars. In conclusion, there are a lot of facilities

to

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for

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travelling among the countries or cities, but

i

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I

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believe that utilizing

personal

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a personal

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car for

traveling

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travelling

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have

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has

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more

entertainments

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entertainment

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.