Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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have been used for leisure

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and research.

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, the majority of people think these places do not matter and should be stopped. In my opinion, they have various problems to impact

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distinct aspects and should set the best choice when shut down. One of the main reasons why

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have made the problems

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animals are imprisoned.

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several

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wildlife feels without freedom because they are restricted in a small area.

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, a lion in

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area that

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covered by a high wall.

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, the

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areas around

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obtain directly affectation

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an

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and a loud noise

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.

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, excrement from some animal specie has a strong smell and they can make a roar

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house. As the result,

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statement absolutely brings drawbacks. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal

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they are closed.

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, the government should establish

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wildlife reserve in order to

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animals free to live and scientists can study the

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proficiently. Another method, if someone who

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about technology and

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with zoologists, they will create a simulator or a virtual reality.

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newest innovation can apply the immersive sensation when they see through a gadget, it visualizes almost real animals and

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a detail instantly for education and entertainment. In conclusion,

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many citizens believe that

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do not play a crucial role in the present day, they still have different choices to avoid the problems. It depends on

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or someone who

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authority.