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Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Every nation relies upon various
sources
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 of
energy
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 to meet its industrial and economic growth requirements. While a majority of nations are heavily dependent upon fossil fuels to meet their
energy
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 requirement, few nations have developed the technical capacity to harness
energy
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 from renewable
sources
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. Certain groups think that renewable
energy
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 is a boon for society while others believe it’s a threat to
energy
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 security.
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 essay will explain both sides of the opinion, but personally, I am in support of adopting renewable
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sources
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.
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, as argued by the opponents, obtaining a continuous supply of electricity from renewable
sources
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 is still a major challenge to resolve.
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 contributes to a non-reliable supply of
energy
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 from renewable
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 to meet the requirement of industries.
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, in
India
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 20% of total industrial units have installed solar panels but still depend either upon
grid
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 supply or diesel operated generators for uninterrupted power supply.
On the other hand
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, clean and green
technologies
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 are revolutionizing the domestic
energy
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 requirements at the household level. Small scale clean
technologies
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such
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 as solar panels, wind turbines and wave turbines are being used widely for domestic
energy
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 production. It is ultimately helping in saving
energy
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 and reducing the dependency on
grid
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energy
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 of these households.
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, these households sell the surplus
energy
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 to the
grid
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 for
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 use.
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, in countries like India and Srilanka, the rooftop solar system is gaining popularity and is successfully adopted by millions of families. In conclusion, most countries still depend upon fossil fuels to meet their
energy
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 requirement and there is a gradual increase in the adoption of renewable
sources
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 with the advancement of clean
technologies
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. The use of clean
technologies
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 to harness electricity from renewable
sources
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 is limited to domestic consumption rather than industrial use. Clean energies are offering value-added services in terms of saving costs and reducing dependency on
grid
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 electricity. The adoption of clean
energy
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 will increase with the advancement of
technologies
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.
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