In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era, transport methods are increasing because of

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technological advances.

Moreover

, governments in every nation have implemented facilities, rules and regulations for

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of the citizens. As long most people believe that

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large

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sum of

money

on constructing fast railway lines between cities is the important rather than spent on improving government

transports

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.

This

essay will focus on these both views and eventually I will give

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my opinion too.

To begin

with, nowadays communities have various transport modules to go anywhere. Particularly, they declare that the fastest

trains

are effective and efficient for their daily transportations .

Therefore

, it helps to save

money

and time rather than traditional

trains

.

For example

, job-related employers who work in the main cities in their countries and residents in

another cities

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can easily move to the workplaces within less time.

As a result

, in

this

machinery world, these types of

trains

are constructed by

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nations in the world.

On the other hand

, some of them believe that sum of

money

want to

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spent

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in

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public

transports

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because they emphasize that

this

is the popular usage among locals.

Furthermore

, since

this

public

transports

are available to passengers in every critical

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and

also

it makes them

to

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move

exact

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destinations.

For instance

, in 2000, an Indian survey shows that 70% of

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indian

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mankind used government

train

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trains

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,

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bus

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for their daily usage.

Consequently

,

this

is popular among communities in every nation. In conclusion, in my perspective is,

government

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the government

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should want to spend

money

to construct the fastest

trains

and development of the public

transports

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. Admittedly, human has own choices according to their purposes like in a choice of transport services. If authorities get productive decisions to improve these

both

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sectors, human beings will have space to do their daily circumstances

with

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efficient

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and effective way.