A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Preeti, I hope you are doing well and everything is fine there. I got the news that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday
this
summer. I would love to say that it is a good plan to enjoy. It would be a change from your regular routine which helps to concentrate and focus more on your goals.
Moreover
, you'll get a chance to meet new people and explore various adventurous activities. I would strongly recommend you, plan for
this
trip.
This
trip will refresh you and bring more peace to the journey of your life.
However
, there would be some negatives
also
. If you will walk
to
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camping you have to skip your classes which will affect your score in the coming term exams.
Furthermore
, It may
also
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your leg. As you have to walk more on mountains and you already have an injury on your right leg during the
last
week. Well, I
also
want to be a part of your
first
-holiday camping but I am unable to be a part of
this
trip due to my office meeting scheduled for that week. But, I promise
next
time I will  definitely accompany you and we will share some precious time. Hope you would have a great journey over there and spend quality moments there. Regards. Kuljeet Kaur.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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