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Many people have now poor memory .what is probably the reason and what should we do to improve?

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Nowadays thinking fast is one of the popular topics since the rise of business competition. Some people believe that new generations have poor
memory
 and there are several reasons behind it.
This
 essay will discuss how our
memory
 effect lifestyle and behaviour.
First
 of all, the human brain can be
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dysfunction
 by multi-tasking work. Most leading companies trends have
this
 working style that requires employees to complete and
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 plenty of projects and tasks. Doing many activities at the same time will lead a brain to overload status which means the remembrance will not be able to function normally.
This
 will be resulted in shorten remembrance and easily forgotten. There is research demonstrates that 90 out of 100 employees in ABC company perform lower quality when the meeting
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 longer than 1.5 hours because the information was overwhelming and a brain decided to shut down, the presentation after an hour and a half is less likely to be remembered. Another key point is the sedentary lifestyle. It causes a negative impact on the intellect system as the body becomes less active. The study from UKS university shows that if mankind sits in the same position for a long time, more than 6 hours, the body system will produce less metabolism and blood will flow slower.
This
 can cause less nutrition to pass to the intellect due to the blood being sent to the back and legs.
Memory
 effectiveness will drop slightly which resulted in poor recollection if the person does not change
this
 behaviour. In conclusion, there are many factors that affect
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human
memory
 but the significant keys are how we live and behave. Unaware of our actions, even small ones
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 will create a hung impact
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 the body and
memory
.
Therefore
, focusing on one thing at a time and moving while working will help.
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