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some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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All communities which live in the world have many positions either good or terrible.There are some societies that to prefer agree with all the bad positions because they think that it is better but many folks had a Contract thought, they think that it should try to enhance conditions, in
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 the right decision to deal with all Conditions is patience and accepted that represent what some people think about uncomfortable Situations.
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 in some positions people think that it has not to agree with a complex Situation and they should try to do and enhance it, many employers around the world could Change and fix the situation using meetings with those who have power and control for that all Uncomfortable conditions will change. In my opinion, both sides have a side of truth but the main point is not just truth but it depends on the people, it must not be a terrible case for any human and those who have control should do as much as they can to change any bad situations because if they don't do anything, I think the cons will be more the pros.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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