You recently go to a concert and thought one of the singer was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance, give details of your musical activities, explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Jackie Jones, I could tell you that I've been a huge fan of yours for years, but I would be lying because I

listened

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your music at your concert yesterday for the

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time. Just one song was enough to make me fall in love with your music. My name is Olivia, I have been playing the guitar since I was seven years old. I learned

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with videos and books so I have been playing "my best friend" for twenty years. I am in a musical group. We perform every Saturday night at the Ocean's Club around 7 p.m. I would like to invite you to attend

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week, it would be a pleasure for me. Maybe you can see me play

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stage

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the stage

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give me

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some

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advice

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or let me know some secrets about

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to become a professional musician. If you decide to attend, a ticket will be waiting for you at the entrance. Thank you Regards. Olivia