Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In human
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, ups and downs are quite common
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and it is everyone's responsibility to tackle
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positions. While some crowd believe that compromise and moving on with
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uncomfortable
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, others argue that spare time and efforts to overcome them for
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future. I would agree with
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viewpoint and discuss both
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sides in the essay. To start with, everyone in their
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may face some tough
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that they think cannot overcome and compromise with what they have and continue to lead
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peacefully.
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who are unsatisfied with their work and salary decided to continue by living with fewer expenses and performing the job
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being allocated to them.
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, that would allow
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to be in their own comfort zone forever.
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of living with limited expectations would be an individual's right which can't be overridden.
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, there are people who really wanted to achieve
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living by overcoming
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their limitations and ridiculous fate.
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, with high motivation and
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they can resolve any conflicts in their
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seamlessly.
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, a tea vendor in India had become Prime Minister despite
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being an ordinary man originating from a remote village. In short, it is not entirely impossible for anyone to reach great heights in their carrier or become rich. In conclusion, there are people who argue that
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living with what they have will bring them peace and happiness, I would deny that as one can make choice to lead
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with what they wanted and get out of tough
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through hard work and certain effort.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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