Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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It is often debated that rich
countries
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should help poor
countries
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. I believe that a helping hand should be limited to education and food. Poor land should not depend upon other others.
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, the people of each country are human
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being
bearing
and they should have the right to educate and live equally.So, it is
moral
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the moral
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duty of modern people to help other
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people where they are not having good resources of food and
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upon importing daily needs things.
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, most the
countries
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do not have the resources to provide
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necessary
education to their youngsters. Every country's future depends upon their youngsters and if they are not getting essential education, how the country will become modern.
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, Sometimes
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countries
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face natural disasters
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as
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,
landslide
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, and any disease which broke the
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financial
budget of the
goverment
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government
. So, at
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time
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other
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should provide medical and
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financial
help to restart their life from the
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beginning
.
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, poor
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should not look for help every
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. Today, if you are educated, you can work from remote in different
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and earn from home. Poor
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should educate their kids so that they can get jobs in different
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and look after their families.
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, many big companies want cheaper resources and reach to other
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, but sometimes
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due to bad policies of the
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they cant invest there. To conclude, as human beings we should help each other in difficult situations, But that help should be limited. Poor nations should try to solve its issue
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before taking any help.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
  • dependency
  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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