Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution? And what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Recently, more and more concerns
of
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about
water
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pollution
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has
been heated, environmental departments Change the verb form
have
are worry
that the Change the verb form
are worried
pollution
of rivers, lakes and seas can Use synonyms
result
in problems Use synonyms
of
both animal life and human society. As far as I am concerned, Change preposition
for
water
sources and Use synonyms
food
resources can be affected by the serious Use synonyms
pollution
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which
cause by Correct pronoun usage
apply
factories
and tourism.
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Firstly
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factories
stand a high percentage of damaging the Use synonyms
water
. As the fee of treating Use synonyms
factories
wastes, chemical wastes and heavy metals in general, is usually high, some Use synonyms
factories
may Use synonyms
left
those substances Change the verb form
leave
be left
into
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in
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water
as a way to due with it. Add an article
the water
For example
, Japan has injected lots of radioactive resources into the sea which Linking Words
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result
in huge damage. Correct subject-verb agreement
results
Secondly
, tourism will Linking Words
aggregates
the Change the verb form
aggregate
pollution
, Use synonyms
for example
, visitors may Linking Words
left
plastic bags or rubbishes on Wrong verb form
leave
beach
, Add an article
the beach
those
items may cause disaster once Correct word choice
and those
it
flow into the ocean.
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they
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result
, both Use synonyms
animal
and Fix the agreement mistake
animals
human
are affected by Fix the agreement mistake
humans
the
environmental problem. As the Correct article usage
apply
water
sources are polluted by the toxic compound, animals who drink the Use synonyms
water
may get sick. Eventually, some animals may lose prey and the Use synonyms
food
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chain
chin
can be affected Correct your spelling
chain
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by negativity
negativity
. Replace the word
negatively
On the other hand
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water
which has been polluted can resist Use synonyms
the
agriculture. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, Linking Words
food
can be poisoned by watering the polluted solutions, it can be dangerous for Use synonyms
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a human
human
to mark the poisoned crop as Fix the agreement mistake
humans
food
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
water
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pollution
can be Use synonyms
easy
created by throwing wastes into rivers, lakes or seas whereas the damage Replace the word
easily
of
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to
water
can Use synonyms
result
in Use synonyms
food
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shortage
for both animals and Fix the agreement mistake
shortages
human
.Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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