Some people believe that preserving the natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
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have
people
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environment
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remain that. Change preposition
to
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apply
people
do not have enough knowledge how
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of how
environment
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people
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environment
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awareness
necessity
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the necessity
natural
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the natural
environmental
. Replace the word
environment
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These
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did not attention to environmentally, biodiversity would be endangered. Example
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biggest
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problems
this
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reason can
imperil living species. Correct pronoun usage
that can
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does
natural
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the natural
environmental
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marine
can lead to marine
pollution
and jeopardize marine
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of waste
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accumulation
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accumulate
this
lead
to adversity for habitat Correct subject-verb agreement
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marine
animals.
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well-known
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environment
is about lessen pollution
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one
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is air
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should Correct article usage
the community
dwindle
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reduce
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air
contamination. For example
, society
can use public transport for their commute instead
of vehicle
. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
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lead
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leads
society
reduce
levels of Wrong verb form
reducing
air
pollution
. Moreover
, folk should be more eco friendly
. Being environmentally friendly Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
lead
to protect living species and biodiversity. Fix the agreement mistake
leads
For instance
, people
should use sustainable products. Sustainable products do not disrupt biodiversity and it would be retrievable.
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the natural
environment
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society
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environment
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eco-friendly
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