some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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tech-savvy modern world, one of the topics for the debate is on designing an appropriate syllabus for the children. Some individuals believe that
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History is not
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subject compared to the
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that teach current trends like
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and Technology.
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topics in all likelihood never will yield a consensual agreement;
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, I believe that all
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are equally important for the community. Undoubtedly, teaching the
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leads youth to get up to date with the current market.
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, training the students with the current technology like Machine Learning and Artificial Intelligence will help them to get
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employment sooner than later as a significant amount of employers across the globe are looking for
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experts in
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skills.
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, there are
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more to explore in the
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, we need more scientists' to bring new innovations in various sectors which is possible only when a sufficient number of kids are trained in
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. Imaginably,
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of things to accomplish in the field of
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driverless cars,
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pollution,
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ways to increase the life span and so on.
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that technology is important to make the impossible as possible.
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, commandable knowledge
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ancient history is
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important to explore
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past mistakes and ensure we
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repeat the same mistakes again.
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, gaining a deep knowledge
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the former world trade business, will
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policymakers to
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appropriate decisions when they are dealing with imports/exports with the other countries.
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, younger generations can grasp the traditions and techniques followed decades ago from the ancient civilization which may be helpful in the current world.
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, recently, one of the geologists discovered the oldest methodology used to treat
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broken bones naturally, which could be used even today.
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, it is crucial to explore former human life to explore, review, and reuse their challenges and solutions.
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, to recapitulate, though some people think the Social subject is not important above paragraphs proven that all the
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are equally important for mankind. Both the curriculum have their own
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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