Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Capitallism

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Capitalism

makes all peoples

work

to earn a living.

However

, there are a lot of various types of

work

. Someone

prefer

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to

work

from

home

but someone chooses to

work

at an

office

or company. In the following paragraph, I will outweigh the advantages and drawbacks of working from

home

On the one hand, Working from

home

will reduce traffic congestion. Especially in gigantic business areas confront

this

problem.

However

, Under the COVID-19 pandemic,

Government

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the Government

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has regulated

lockdown

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the lockdown

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a

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city and working from

home

. It reduces a lot of traffic

jam

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.

Moreover

, Working from

home

brings family

spend

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time

together. Sadly, Some parents

have

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not

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no

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time

for

children

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their children

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because a lot of

work

from morning until evening. It is the best

time

to spend life with family.

On the other hand

, Working from

home

bring negative effects.

First

, Working from

home

makes people stress more than in the

office

. Some people are not accustomed

with

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to

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an atmosphere or they confront noise pollution from

another member

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other members

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family or they feel working all the

time

because not have break

time

like in a real

office

.

Moreover

, Working from

home

reduces economic growth and does not contribute money to SMEs.

For instance

, Some local

restaurant

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restaurants

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and

cafe

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cafes

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were affected by revenue from

office

customer

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customers

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not enough to support a family.

In addition

, Some extrovert people feel depressed because they cannot participate in social activities. In conclusion, I think working from

home

has many

drawbacks

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than

benefit

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benefits

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.

However

, I advise companies

have

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a policy working from

home

and switch to working in an

office