Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Capitallism
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Capitalism
makes all peoples
work
to earn a living.
However
, there are a lot of various types of
work
. Someone
prefer
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to
work
from
home
but someone chooses to
work
at an
office
or company. In the following paragraph, I will outweigh the advantages and drawbacks of working from
home
On the one hand, Working from
home
will reduce traffic congestion. Especially in gigantic business areas confront
this
problem.
However
, Under the COVID-19 pandemic,
Government
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the Government
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has regulated
lockdown
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the lockdown
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a
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city and working from
home
. It reduces a lot of traffic
jam
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.
Moreover
, Working from
home
brings family
spend
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time
together. Sadly, Some parents
have
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not
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no
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time
for
children
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their children
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because a lot of
work
from morning until evening. It is the best
time
to spend life with family.
On the other hand
, Working from
home
bring negative effects.
First
, Working from
home
makes people stress more than in the
office
. Some people are not accustomed
with
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an atmosphere or they confront noise pollution from
another member
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other members
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family or they feel working all the
time
because not have break
time
like in a real
office
.
Moreover
, Working from
home
reduces economic growth and does not contribute money to SMEs.
For instance
, Some local
restaurant
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restaurants
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and
cafe
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cafes
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were affected by revenue from
office
customer
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customers
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not enough to support a family.
In addition
, Some extrovert people feel depressed because they cannot participate in social activities. In conclusion, I think working from
home
has many
drawbacks
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than
benefit
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benefits
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.
However
, I advise companies
have
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to have
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a policy working from
home
and switch to working in an
office
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