Some people think that giving gifts and presents to friends and family is important to show them that we care. Others think that there are more important ways. Discuss both and give your opinion.

There are many ways that
people
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each
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other. Some choose
giving
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various items
such
as
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a flower
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flower
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flowers
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or valuable things to persons
to
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beloved,
another ones
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can
expressed
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own feelings by using different ways. From my point of view, sudden
suprises
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surprises
to be done will make many humans happy.  The
relation
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dynamics between
indivuduals
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individuals
depend on many factors. While the activities seem
insignificance
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for somebody, in some cases,
this
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can be important for others.
For example
, giving a beautiful flower to
woman
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can be a quite meaningful situation.
Moreover
,
this
gift or behaviour type can seduce persons. From another perspective, the key point
in
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here is
the
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sincerity. If the presents do not carry the powerful emotions, there
is
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no any
meanings
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. On the other side,
instead
of taking to valuable instruments or tools, the words which they make
people
feel energetic can be said. it is a true approach that as long as individuals understand own how important is, each positive act brings about a sweet smile. As mentioned before, the
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lifestyles
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life styles
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lifestyles
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of
people
determine their emotional paths. To recapitulate, what
important
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is important
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is not
physicial
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physical
items, contrary
of
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it, emotional behaviour ways are more decisive for
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tangible symbols
  • Affection
  • Materialism
  • Cultural traditions
  • Impact
  • Relationships
  • Quality time
  • Acts of service
  • Communication
  • Shared experiences
  • Equating
  • Emotional presence
  • Physical presence
  • Material possessions
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