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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, there are different opinions regarding teenage conflicts with
thier
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their
parents
, Some of us think it
as
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 an important factor to raise
children
 while some of us see it as a negative impact. Teenage is
crucial
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a crucial
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 period for
children
 where they develop their own views &
opinion
.
Conflict
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The conflict
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 between
parents
 &
children
 is
common
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a common
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 phenomenon in
this
 period as
parents
 become
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overprotective
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over protective
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overprotective
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 of their
child
 &
children
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, on the other hand,
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on the other hand
 crave for freedom in every possible way. We will discuss both
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views
further
 below in the paragraph.
Firstly
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a parents
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parents
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parents'
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 point of view, Teenage
conflict
 is important during
this
 stage as they are more protective of their
children
. It is important for them to know
whereabouts
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the whereabouts
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 of their
child
,
there
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 friend circle etc.
Moreover
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 it is one of the important
period
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 where a
child
's career is taking shape, it is important for
parents
 to keep their
children
 more focussed even if they are of
different
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a different
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opinion
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opinions
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.
However
, Teenage
conflict
 can
also
 have negative impacts on
child's
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a child's
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 future. Constant arguments or
difference
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differences
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 of
opinion
 can result in loss of confidence in
children
. It might
also
 affect
there
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their
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decision making
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decision-making
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 capacity. It can
also
 play a vital role in shaping their social well being as they might get confined to their home due to constant
difference
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differences
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 of
opinion
 between themselves & their
parents
. It can
also
 impact them on
emotional
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an emotional
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 level. In my
opinion
, it is important for
children
 to have
freedom
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the freedom
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 to express their opinions & thoughts freely to their
parents
. To conclude, considering the emotional & mental well being of
children
 in their teenage years it is important to avoid teenage
conflict
 as it might leave a
long lasting
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long-lasting
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 impact
over
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on
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 a
child
's mind.
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