Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
There is a saying that cultivating kids to be good residents or employees ought to be a priority in the background of the promotion of modern education, while others argue that individual interests are always the
first
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an issue. In Linking Words
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essay, l will explain why l agree with the former view, Linking Words
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we should still take into account other factors.
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To begin
with, at the heart of Linking Words
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matter is that the quality of the population will be improved aimed at general educational goal, which not only ensures the social stability but Linking Words
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enhances the cohesion of a nation. To be more specific, learning how to live in harmony with others is the Linking Words
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thing to meet the requirement of a good citizen for students based on a certain aim. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is common to witness plenty of related group games played by minors in many public nursery schools, Linking Words
thus
an awareness of teamwork could be built among these kids when they are too young to deal with different matters about Linking Words
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As a result
, most of them tend to be great citizens after growing up in Linking Words
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general system, Linking Words
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as in Japan.
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However
, it is Linking Words
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unnecessary to weaken the property of the personal stake in the system of education, since they may lose the motivation to progress without private support. To exemplify, if a child makes a huge contribution but accepts nothing as a return in a tug-of-war, Linking Words
next
time he will be less likely to participate in Linking Words
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By contrast
, a young winner with rewards seems to behave better.
In conclusion, l believe that the national general education is supposed to be a key standard of schooling on the grounds that whole security of the society and unity, as long as certain individual benefits are got guaranteed to some extent.Linking Words
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