Q. Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?

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There has been a debate about how to teach students the topic "agriculture". Some of them

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favor

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of teaching

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agriculture

as an act. I think that would be a good

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approach

to show students how to grow

food

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and cook it at

schools

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Agicultere

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Agriculture

is a very serious

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lifetime

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subject. We should consider it as much as we can. Early age

aducation

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education

should take it seriously and show pupils how to deal with vegetables,

furits

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fruits

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nutrition

nutrients

nutrions

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. It is always the best way to teach them as a practice. If they know how to grow a vegetable, they will understand it better. In

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case, plating fruit or

vegateble

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vegetable

would be

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one of the easiest

way

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to make them learn how much effort we should put

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it. After all of

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learning, they would

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see

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agriculture

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different

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perspective. After all of

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learning in a practical way, they will never waste

food

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, they understand how to

comsume

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consume

it with respect.

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, if we just let them read about cooking or planting a tree, they will get the basic

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log

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of it. Beyond

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understanding, they wouldn't know how hard it is for us to have something on our plates. Education is always the golden key. If we teach people how to grow

food

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and make it ready for eating in practice, it will make much sense for them. Due to

these reason

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above, we should have it a lesson at schools. In

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conclusion

, there wouldn't be

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that much so there would be enough

food

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for everyone. In

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new are, under these circumstances

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eco system

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, air

polution

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pollution

, it has been hard to plant a tree. Being well aware of

agriculte

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agriculture

turns people

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restpectfull

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respectful

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

297 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutritional education
Self-sufficiency
Life skills
Curriculum
Extracurricular
Sustainability
Organic gardening
Culinary skills
Healthy eating habits
Agricultural knowledge
Food literacy
Home economics
Hands-on learning
Sustainable farming
Kitchen facilities
Environmental stewardship

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Q. Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?

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