Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

21st

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The 21st

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century has seen the rise of social media and online streaming media. One of the main reason entertainers

such

as film

stars

or sports

stars

are

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is

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being paid soo much

money

. There are

multibillion

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multi-billion

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deals signed between streaming

medias

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media

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and

sport

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sports

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bodies

such

as English Premier League. These sports bodies earn soo much

money

from these streaming

medias

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media

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because people buy their subscriptions just to see these sports

stars

. Fans are crazy for these

stars

and want to copy them in every aspect of their life. If

these sportsman

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this sportsman

these sportsmen

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or musicians

advertized

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advertised

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a brand, the popularity of that brand will increase which will reflect on their sales and

it

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apply

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will increase the sale of their brand. These sales will help them in earning

alot

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a lot

of

money

. So they are investing in these

stars

and paying them

alot

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a lot

of

money

only to earn more

money

.

For example

, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a very famous footballer currently

paying

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playing

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for a football club Manchester United is being paid approximately 1 million Euros weekly, which seems to be very high. But

on the other hand

, his club is earning 5 million Euros weekly by only selling his merchandise. So,

i

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I

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totally disagree with the people who think that

stars

are being paid too much

money

. It is a free market, so if a business can afford

paying

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to pay

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his

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its

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employee too much

money

, it shouldn't be a problem for anyone.

In addition

to

this

, teachers should be highly paid

but

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based on their

qualification

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qualifications

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. Because teachers are the base of

developing

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development

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a

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of a

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nation. Without good

teachers

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,teachers

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you can't

develope

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develop

a

prosper

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prosperous

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nation. But surely they can't be paid as much

stars

are getting paid because it is not possible. But governments can help them by providing

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them with

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with

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apply

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special social benefits.