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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home , leisure and work activities To what extent do the benefits of Information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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 plays a major role in everyone's life by providing more facilities and giving them more options.
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technology
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 is changing plenty of areas of our lives and the present
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 influences our
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, free
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 and work activities.I totally believe that advantages are more than disadvantages, due to face main three reasons, which are presented in below paragraphs.
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 with, using
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 we convert our
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 into a smart
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 and do everything
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 it prevents the
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 from major damage and saves electricity using different sensors, which are connected to each other with help of
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technology
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. During our free
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 IT provide entertainment through various platforms
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 as Netflix, Youtube and Instagram,
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 it connects humans, who are located overseas.
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, in working place we do more than one task at the same
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 with the help of
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technology
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, apart from
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 it gives more safety in a workplace using different aspects of IT like Artificial intelligence,
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 in Amazon robots are used more than humans as a working purpose
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 all work do in quickly and more efficient and give more transparency to the customer as well as the seller because all the robots are connected each other and exchange valid
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 to each other in very convenient. Moving on to the other part, sometimes
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 is harmful to everyone's life as
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example people use social sites to relieve their stress but using social sites it takes our private and important data without our permission and sells it to giant companies.
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,
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 strips human positions in different workplaces
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 ample of people lost their jobs during a covid-19 pandemic due to
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. To conclude,
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, sometimes
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technology
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 is not good for humans for every
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. Not only
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 provide more facilities, but
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 at working place we do more than one task at the same
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 with high safety.
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,I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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