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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home , leisure and work activities To what extent do the benefits of Information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Information
technology
 plays a major role in everyone's life by providing more facilities and giving them more options.
Information
technology
 is changing plenty of areas of our lives and the present
time
 influences our
home
, free
time
 and work activities.I totally believe that advantages are more than disadvantages, due to face main three reasons, which are presented in below paragraphs.
To begin
 with, using
information
technology
 we convert our
home
 into a smart
home
 and do everything
on
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 voice commands ,
furthermore
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 it prevents the
home
 from major damage and saves electricity using different sensors, which are connected to each other with help of
information
technology
. During our free
time
 IT provide entertainment through various platforms
such
 as Netflix, Youtube and Instagram,
also
 it connects humans, who are located overseas.
Moreover
, in working place we do more than one task at the same
time
 with the help of
information
technology
, apart from
this
 it gives more safety in a workplace using different aspects of IT like Artificial intelligence,
for example
 in Amazon robots are used more than humans as a working purpose
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as a result
 all work do in quickly and more efficient and give more transparency to the customer as well as the seller because all the robots are connected each other and exchange valid
information
 to each other in very convenient. Moving on to the other part, sometimes
information
technology
 is harmful to everyone's life as
an
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example people use social sites to relieve their stress but using social sites it takes our private and important data without our permission and sells it to giant companies.
In addition
,
Information
technology
 strips human positions in different workplaces
as a result
 ample of people lost their jobs during a covid-19 pandemic due to
information
technology
. To conclude,
although
, sometimes
information
technology
 is not good for humans for every
time
. Not only
information
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technology
 provide more facilities, but
also
 at working place we do more than one task at the same
time
 with high safety.
Therefore
,I strongly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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