These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, communities tend to live in a place where it is not their hometown. Many people migrate to new places, like

city

even other countries, and leave the house where they come from. It may

as a result

of financial and occupation demand or even they just want to live in new circumstances. In my opinion,

this

type of development can bring negative and positive impacts on society.

However

, for me, it will more advantages than disadvantages.

Therefore

, in

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essay I will describe my opinion from both perspectives, especially the weaknesses of

this

development.

To begin

with, the benefit of migration is fulfilment in financial support and better carrier, as the value in our society the better job and the more money we have, the more wealth we are. the family often move to the

city

to get

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and gain more money. It is not only a distance movement but

also

a social movement. Through the shift to a better community, they can

also

change their life fortune.

For instance

, my parents are migrants. They change from one

village

to the capital

city

of the province where I am living now. At the

first

, they went to the

city

for getting a better education. Yet,

finally

, they got a better carrier in the

city

.

Thus

, they decided to step away from their hometown.

On the other hand

, the disadvantage is types of jobs in their origin place will disappear.

For example

, as I mentioned before about my parents, the fact that a lot of my parent's friends from the same

village

also

moved from that

village

.

As a result

, the

village

looks so quiet, and there is only a handful of people are living there. Yet, the most tragic is that most of the fertile soil there is not used again owing to the fact that lack of farmers there. To conclude, moving to other places and leaving the origin venue, can be advantages and disadvantages. Yet, from my perspective,

this

development will be more destructive than constructive if there is no decisive regulation to control the movement of the community.