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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

#dangers #people #habit #society
It is the fact,that smoking is very harmful
for
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organism
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, but despite
this
, a lot of men still keep on with
this
 bad addiction.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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causes of it and possible solutions. The main factor,
that is
 causing
habit
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 of smoking , is frequent stress.
Firstly
, nicotine is known to be relaxing. It
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 stress from muscles and brain and became addictive with time.
Therefore
 it is hard to give up
this
 habitude. Most
people
 who smoke are thinking that smoking is the best way to deal with the stress, they face up
everyday
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.
For example
,
people
 who work in
big
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corporation
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 are smoking to minimize depression of their busy
schedule
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. Another key aspect is that
ind
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in
 today's world,
people
 consider
that
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e-cigarettes in their hands are looking cool and show their high status. There are several methods that can help to solve the problem.
Firstly
,
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government should implement more tax on
cigarrets
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cigarettes
.
High
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 cost of
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product
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 will prevent
people
 from extra spending money and they wouldn't buy cigarettes in big quantities.
Secondly
, the ministry should establish
age
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 limit for smokers.Due to
this
 rule, youngers up to 18 can't buy and smoke out of interest and
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maybe
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may be
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 in the future don't even want to try.
Moreover
, the correct surrounding circle of
child
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a child
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 can save him from bad habits, showing approximate
behavior
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. In conclusion, the majority of men prefer smoking unlooking
for
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 severe
effect
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. In
this
 essay I have discussed
about
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reasons for
this
 issue ,but
also
 offered numerous methods to solve them.
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