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why do we need to prevent the extinction of some animals like dinasours and dodos if it is caused by natural processes. what is your opinion about this.

#extinction #animals #dinasours #dodos #processes
"Nature is the art of god"
Animals
 are an important
Part
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 of the food cycle, and humans depend on them for a wide range of requirements. Human life has become
Superme
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Supreme
 to all else with no respect left for nature.
Animals
 are an integral part of
the
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natural
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nature
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 in fact, human beings are
also
 a form of animal. Yet many
animals
 are
dangers
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from
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 the earth. Every animal has a place in the ecosystem in the Food Chain to keep life in
balence
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balance
.
Animals
also
 have a role to play in our daily lives. They help in farming, transport or Provide Food, egg,
milk
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. we must protect them Since they are dependent on us. In the
past
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animais
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animals
 have had a
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greater
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grater
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 role to play than now Elephants, horses, donkeys, etc. whether they are useful to humans or not, it is mandatory to respect that aspect of nature and to
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animals
. There are many
Species
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 of
animals
 that are suffering from the aggressive actions of human beings
into
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 the forests on
other natural ecosystem
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another natural ecosystem
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. Tips to Save
Animals
 you pledge not to wear anything that comes from
animals
such
 as leather. Just by
this
 one Step alone, You can save the lives of loot
animals
 each year. You can
also
 help Save
animals
 by not entertaining them in
zoo
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zoos
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, movies and Circus because in these places everything is denied to them and they are not in their natural habitat. In conclusion, After the discussion, one must agree that 'save
animals
' must be
a
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made into an awareness program For all to understand the value of animal life. Special reserve areas for protecting the endangered species where the human presence is controlled.
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