More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Not surprisingly, in today's world, obesity is widespread like a virus and hard to cope with the situation we are in unless we are sensible to stop being overweight. Not only the children but

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age have been fighting with that unfavourable issue. Let me tell you about

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with relevant examples as far as I am concerned. Yes,

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has been a serious problem for developing countries. There are a host of unsolved problems more than we are imagining if we don’t have to be conscious about it at all. It’s

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a simple underlying matter of not enough physical activity and unhealthy diet activity. With the enhancement of modern technology, smart devices are the most popular utilities among people in a decade. The individuals’ elementary

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have been obviously changed into

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in another unknown world by the development of smartphones. For

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topic, I have to say the disadvantages of

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smart phones

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. Under the supervision of parents,

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should be allowed to access limited use of watching tv, playing video games, surfing the internet and some

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. Due to the lack of control,

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are over satisfied to spend their

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on these. The outcome is that they are gradually in unfavourable conditions

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as being overweight, lack of enough sleep and eating more junk foods without having foods full of nourishment. Being in the sedentary

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and no action

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doing exercises tend to obese without any alarming signs. If we are unconsciously following

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pattern of living, our children are going to be at the point of anxiety conditions very soon. Obesity’s consequences are diabetes, high blood pressure, heart diseases and breathing problems like sleep apnea.

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of spending much

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on these

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, it’s better

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the parents let their

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play around with others in the park or in the compound yards. Diverse playing games on the ground is the best exercise for the

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. There is one main thing left to mention about obesity.

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an eating curriculum in their daily routine. In

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day and age, there are too many fast-food restaurants.

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is not good for our

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because food is made to be more delicious by using some chemicals which let our bodies

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cholesterol and excess fat. Today parents are pretty busy at their work and running like a storm all the

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. They are unable to give enough

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to take good care of their kid's eating

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, they don’t mind ordering snacks

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as sandwiches, burgers, candies, cookies, and so forth in restaurants or vending machines. They don’t even have

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to think about what is good or what is bad for their

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situation leads to big trouble in the very near future. Home cooking is

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effective way to against obesity among children. The foodstuffs

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full of

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nourishment

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good to circulate blood through their bodies. Being good

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flow of blood is the best positive sign for

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health

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. Sometimes, genetics can play a role and sometimes there’s

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and

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underlying medical condition. To sum up, there is a correlation between

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and wealth.

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is the most essential thing in our living

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. Our offsprings are our future. So we have to be very aware of their living

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