In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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Nowadays crime has been rampant
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many parts of the world. In
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root causes of
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issue and discuss several ways to curb the
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wrong doings
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with, lesser fortunate individuals falling under the lower socio-economic group end up stealing.
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, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer,
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due to circumstances, the lower economic class may
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indulge
in thefts.
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, a destitute person may steal
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cash required for his child's operation. Apart from that, social media influences people
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involved in illegal activities or
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inappropriate
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unappropriate
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behaviour.
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, these
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pernicious
steps
results
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in smuggling, raping or murdering.
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, the
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Government
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laid stringent policies, but there are no penalty expenses imposed on the criminals. To illustrate
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, a robber may get bailed out and roam freely without any guilt,
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it's vital to burden them with
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exorbitant
monetary charges as well as expect them to carry out some mandatory work at a charity, which acts as
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rehabilitation for them.
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, is it quintessential to showcase the arduous life of a prisoner to
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of the world, so that no one dares to move in any wrong direction
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, if employment burgeons
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we may see a drop in the number of thefts, so more jobs should be made available, which will result in parity among the citizens. To summarise, as
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society is divided
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different sections and due to
prevalance
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prevalence
of unwealthy pockets results in higher criminal records.
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, imposing charges and involving them in non-profit activities as well as some
prevantive
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preventive
preventative
actions like
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of work
opportunites
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opportunities
could mitigate the issue. With help of the above pointers, we may see a consistent plunge in
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rate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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