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Logging of rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#rain #forests #extinction #life
In the
last
 period of time vast
teritories
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territories
 of
rain
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rainforests
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forests
 vanished due to massive deforestation.People and animals are
badely
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badly
barely
 affected and I think
this
 human action puts in huge danger both of them.
Firstly
, one of the main cause of animal extinction is losing their habitat, which is the result of
logging
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the logging
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of
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rain
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rainforests
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forests
. Due to huge deforestation,many species are endangered,
some
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and some
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 of them already are close to
disappearance
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disappearing
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.
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Losing
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Loosing
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Losing
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 their home, animals are exposed to predators or they do not find food anymore.
For instance
, Borneo
rain
forests
, which are the orangutans'
homlands
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homelands
, were
distroyed
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destroyed
 by man for
diferent
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different
 reasons.
Consequently
,
this
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these
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 apes mislay
they
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their
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 natural dwelling and
for
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today they are close to extinction.
Moreower
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Moreover
, the
rain
forests
 have an important role in
climat
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climate
 balance. Cutting the threes
we
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apply
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negatively
influence
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influences
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 the
climat
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climate
 , which is already in
critical
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a critical
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 situation today. In many countries, due to the
climat
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climate
 change, huge agricultural
teritories
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territories
 dried up, and people in developing countries are in danger of starvation.
For instance
, in India in the
last
decades
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,decades
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 vast green lands become
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a drought
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drought
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droughts
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. In some states in Africa people are
sufering
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suffering
 not just from
hungre
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hunger
hungry
 but thirst too , due to lack of water. In conclusion,
cuttin
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cutting
of
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down
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 the
rain forest
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rainforest
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 for human
necesities
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necessities
drive
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drives
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to
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apply
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serious and dramatic consequences
in
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on
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 our planet
such
 as
climat
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climate
 change, plant and animal species extinction and
jeopardysing
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jeopardising
jeopardizing
the
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apply
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human life.
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