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The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#media #effect #relationships #people
With the new development in electronic
media
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people
 have new opportunities
in
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for
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 communication
such
 as
relationships
 between
people
. And some
people
 think that it negatively affects
people
's
relationships
. Actually, I agree with
this
 statement, but there are still some advantages
in
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this
. On the one hand, we can observe that electronic
media
 is bad for personal
relationships
. With social
media
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people
 forget about meeting in person and they lose their communication skills which is extremely terrible. After all, in the
future
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 there will be some problems with solving problems face to face because there wasn't proper practice.
On the other hand
, electronic
media
 are
also
 a way to make
relationships
 better.
For instance
, 30 years ago there were no phones or something else to communicate very fast as we're doing right now. Nowadays,
people
 can chat or call each other on different topics no matter where
you
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 stay and no matter what device
do
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you use. In my opinion, it is really convenient in many ways.
Furthermore
, the progress of technology has gone too far, so
people
 can have new personal
relationships
in
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 social
media
such
 as Instagram, Facebook, Telegram and so on. That means every person can find the other half or friend despite any problems with communication in real life. In conclusion, I would like to say there are many pros and cons
in
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 the use of electronic
media
.
People
 have to find their own golden mean between
relationships
 in social
media
 and in real life because it is very crucial.
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